Saturday, January 24, 2009

Backwards

Dry Rain
Black Snow
Cold Fire
Boring Desires
Dying Young
Empty Song
Quiet Thunder
Never Come Back
After You've Gond Under
Sour Sugar
Wet Desert
Untrying Effort
Death Is Life
Life Is Death
Easy Fall
Harder Step
Welcome To The Life
Of The Unperfect.

Thursday, January 22, 2009

Understanding.

Hey everyone! It's Amanda! This is a poem I made in my english class! Please tell me what you think!

How can you smile
When you feel so unhappy
Is it a sign
That you're in denial?
How can you smile
When everything before
Your eyes
Would make you want to cry?
But you just stand there
A movie of hate playing before
Your Gleaming eyes
My voice screaming at you
Why Why Why!
How can you feel anything but
Hate, anger, and sadness?
Errupting within you
Only a million times harder than this?
Minutes pass
Another thing gone
And you finally hear
My agonizing song.
Tears choke between my eyes
Streaming down
Along with my cries.
And you begin to chime
"Life is what gets us all, but as long as you stand tall, you can make it. Memories are the ones that stay, no matter the price we pay. Why are you crying? Because you lost it all? But in reality, the enemies will be the ones to fall. But remember, you still have me, and the memories we were cherishing."
And that's when I understood the meaning of life.

Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Greetings and a POEM!! :]

Hey everyone. :]

I'm gonna help Amanda with blog now too.

I also write poems and that pretty much it.

So expect a lot of those from me! haha :]

I'm now gonna post my first poem on the blog.

I wrote it today during my science class.

Please don't ask me to explain it because I really have no idea how to.

It just came to me.

Always Changing

always changing
never ending

things come
things go

things change
things grow

everything is
always changing
always growing

growing closer
to the day
we die

but still
never ending

Thanks guys. :]

Lexi <3>

Monday, January 19, 2009

The Flower: Before And After

Ok, so I posted this poem on my other blog, and I got some very useful feedback. So, I decided to change it. But first I will post the very first version, then the re-finished one after.


The Flower (take 1)
How can flowers bloom
Day after day?
With everything around
their beautiful petals
as boring and ordinary
as dried out clay
But why do us as humans
have the right to judge
day to day things
With only one grudge?
What do you really see when you glance at that flower?
Red?
Green?
Something Unseen?
You see, its not the appearance
One should conceive
For there isnt one way a person could be
For there isnt one way a flower should be.
This is how it goes
This is how life flows.
Beauty around us
Beauty slipping past us.
Only being mistaken as ugly.
But as that flower is being judged
As it is being ignored.
Havent you noticed
It doesnt change its way
Because of what one person may say?
The wind gives it confidense
As it finds its way
Growing for something much much more
Than you and I.
The grass gives the flower
Its last goodbyes
Waving with sadness
Happiness and Surprise.
Take another look at that one single flower, you ignored last year.
What have you noticed, not seen before?
Confidence bursts,
And you only hurt.
Because you were the one judging
As the flower was distending
You should be that flower
No matter the things people may say.
Because one day when you're about to give up
That person may find you
And have nothing to say.
So listen to your heart
See the little things life provides
Feel the wind, invisible to your eyes
And be that flower
Climbing towards the sky.


The Flower (take 2)
How can flowers bloom
Day after day?
With everything around
Always the same.
But why do us as humans
have the right to judge
day to day things
With only one grudge?
What do you really see when you glance at that flower?
Red?
Green?
Something Unseen?
You see, its not the appearance
One should conceive
For there isnt one way a person could be
For there isnt one way a flower should be.
This is the message that is always given off
Beauty comes first
Ugly is a loss
Beauty around us
Beauty slipping past us.
Only being mistaken as ugly.
But as that flower is being judged
As it is being ignored.
Havent you noticed
It doesnt change its way
Because of what one person may say?
The wind gives it confidense
As it finds its way
Growing for something much much more
Than you and I.
The grass gives the flower
Its last goodbyes
Waving with sadness
Happiness and Surprise.
Before you know it.
Its been a year.
And that flower is still very near.
So what have you noticed, not seen before?
Confidence bursts,
And you only hurt.
Because you were the one judging
As the flower was distending
Humans are just like flowers
Living and dying
But the difference is, flowers never stop trying.
No matter the things people may say.
YOu should never give up
Or feel let down
Because that person may find you
And have nothing to say.
So listen to your heart
See the little things life provides
Feel the invisible winds traveling past your eyes
Here its confidence to your ears.
And be that flower
Climbing towards the sky.
Which one do you like better?

Welcome!

Hello fellow bloggers! You all may know me from my other blog, dedicated to reading. If you dont know me, click here to view my other book reviewing blog!

But this one isnt for book reviewing! On this blog, I am going to be posting my poems and short stories I have finished writing. So, Please comment on them, and give me truthful feedback! I'd really appreciate it!
-Amanda